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"The masque of the red death" Help?
I have to write a paper on "The masque of the red death"about symbolism and I'm wondering if this is a good introduction.(AP class)
The Masque Of The Red Death contains many symbols.A symbolism a person, place, thing or event that stands both for its self and beyond itself. Edgar Allen Poe used symbols throughout his writing career and that often reflected his life. The three major symbols in "The Masque of the red Death" is the ebony clock, the seven rooms, and the seventh room its self are going to be explaining them in the following.
I will like to add or change my introduction and tell me what you think of mines.and your help will be greatly appreciated.
well, first thing's first: Your paragraph sounds very elementary-school (no offense meant). It's too bluntly stated and is a little too vague in the symbolism area. For instance, if I were writing an essay on the symbolism of ... lets say... The Scarlet Letter.
EXAMPLE:
Throughout the novel, The Scarlet Letter, a constant struggle is shown between the hardened protestant society and individuality, and, from which, Hester, Pearl, and Dimmesdale attempt to break away. Hester, scarred by the scarlet letter adorning her breast, is humiliated publicly for her adultery, regardless of her efforts to reform and benefit society. But even so, the product of her adultery brings more good to the community than may first appear as well as separates her from the strict society and allowing her to view its flaws. The river, symbolic of freedom from society's grasp, flows freely like her daughter, Pearl, who seems to be a completely separate entity in the novel because of her pixie-likeness. The scarlet letter itself symbolizes more than just the word adultery and grows into something more than it's original meaning.
Ok now that that's done, I wanted to point out a few good things to find in an AP thesis paragraph. The thesis doesn't have to be bluntly stated as you did and can be both implied or spread out. 2nd: When writing your intro, try to tie in the theme as well. 3rd: You need to be less vague about your symbols and the symbolism. In other words, include what part of the symbolism you will be discussing, why they are significant, etc. in the intro. If it's too broad, it literally isn't saying much. 4th: Your intro is really jagged in that it doesn't flow very well. Try to make the sentences tie into each other. 5th: Stating the definition of symbolism isn't the best idea, seeing that the person grading your paper will already know what symbolism is. 6th: Discussing Edgar Allen Poe's previous writings is really superfluous, since the essay should be based on The Masque of the Red Death, not on Edgar Allen Poe.
If there's any more help that you need, just add extra details to your question and I'll edit my answer to accomodate.
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